JUst read this. Good job, Days!A little sunshine for your rose, things that are natural are never without a certain grace.
Snowflakes
In bits of rhythm, laced together by rushes of tethered thoughts
It fell upon my clothes, and brushed my eyelashes
Whispering thought in my ear, asking me why I care
So much, for what? The way I waste my years…
But I shrug them aside, a natural motion of pace
Moving ahead to my destiny, not straying in their
Beckons to relinquish the thoughts of the day
Tonight I'll gaze out my window and try to remember
What they told me, why I was here, what to watch for,
Why I should have strayed…
Why are they always right, when they come they cause panic
They fall into our lives, they take over our paths
Gentle, soft, but powerful, and in control of agenda and time
"Not that way!" they insist, "don't be so harsh!"
…give it time, it will carry, there's no need to rush
Remember your thoughts in your youth? The days
When cares were fleeting, when time was not the enemy?
Why do you make it a weight? Crush yourself with the lie?
Come look out at the moment, breathe the fresh humid puff
Stare at the cloud, your hot steam stirring with the cool reprise
If you rush, you will lose the chance to peer into the stillness
Steal one more invisible take of the lovely quiet,
the dream; You can't hold and can't let go
Like the quality of the misty air in front of you
Something you know so well and forget so readily
To not kill your life on the hard stuff
Return to the quiet, take back your own heart
That's what they were telling me
I hate them, they are so free to follow the wind
While I return to my room and worries of the night
Days, poetry can be free verse. Your poem (in my opinion) is an example of such. Again I say, "Good job, Days."2005 Fray Winterfest entry ... I'm not a poet so I just wrote what I could, I wanted to be part of the fun; they told me it was prose, not poetry. But I won the "there's a first time for everything" award
thanks RedCloud
Something surely inspired you the day you wrote that! :clap2:thanks, Addy. Wish I could write like that every day, but really, that was the only one for me. I have a recipe for spaghetti sauce and I have that poem, it's all down hill after that.
thanks, Addy. Wish I could write like that every day, but really, that was the only one for me. I have a recipe for spaghetti sauce and I have that poem, it's all down hill after that.
Something surely inspired you the day you wrote that! :clap2:
Now you're probably going to tell me on the day you penned your recipe for spaghetti sauce -- you were suffering from hunger pangs!!
I bet you have lots of poems yet to write,, & hope you will continue writing your poetry, Days!
From my book: Dreams of a Forgotten ManWith poetry, we simply enjoy the many contributions. The goal is to share a love of poetry. Introduce yourself with poems and friendships happen. Never fear offering a poem as we expect great support for all poets who arrive here.
Have fun!
Thank You Rudyard KiplingWith poetry, we simply enjoy the many contributions. The goal is to share a love of poetry. Introduce yourself with poems and friendships happen. Never fear offering a poem as we expect great support for all poets who arrive here.
Have fun!
I'll get past that somehow.I like the poems,but not the signature so can not give the post a Like.