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A Haiku in three verse (5,7,5) for those who are called

lilly

Council Member
Summer Night

Dew damp ground cool lays
Fireflies twinkle and flitter
Barking dog distant noise faint
Porch swing barely moves
thoughts adrift
Moments flee unnoticed
This is your best. No babies yet Addy.

Good Night,

Me

Yes we can start another if you like.
 

lilly

Council Member
This is your best.


Yes we can start another if you like.
Ya know Addy, I think I will pass, not liking it like I thought I would. You start another and I'm sure there will be many that will be happy to join in.
 

Addy

Rebuild With Biden!
Ya know Addy, I think I will pass, not liking it like I thought I would. You start another and I'm sure there will be many that will be happy to join in.
N/P, Lil.. Haiku is fun to write IMO.. And I will try to write more, learning the style as I go -- but it will probably be kept private..
Had to take a lunch break.. just on for a short while..
 

lilly

Council Member
N/P, Lil.. Haiku is fun to write IMO.. And I will try to write more, learning the style as I go -- but it will probably be kept private..
Had to take a lunch break.. just on for a short while..
Addy if you enjoy, don't keep it private, I just could not get with it. I'll post on your thread but not with a poem. I enjoy my camera and as much as I thought I would this, I have to admit no. Don't let me discourage you in the least, you have a real talent for it.
 

Addy

Rebuild With Biden!
You haven't discouraged me, Lil. Thanks for the compliment.. Doubtful I have any talent though! :) Just a means of expressing feelings!

Hope you will share more of your photos.. that would be :cool:
 

Days

Commentator
Very nice lines.. Lil! :cool: I am not sure mine is Haiku though..

But regardless.. still can enjoy the prose in whatever one writes!
Sandy is no longer with us, she passed on to the better world. Years ago, when my son was in middle school, they did assignments in haiku and I shared my son's haiku with Sandy, and Sandy wrote posts to Daniel encouraging him.

From what I remember, haiku is the art of descriptive words used in pattern, like painting a picture with words. the 5-7-5 syllable rhythm is the basic step, and just like any dance, you can get more complicated, but you have to stay in step.

I enjoyed your offerings in this thread, and smiled at every word.
 
K

Pity, the abyss

beside him in bed, she dead

he not a clever man


For those who know who I'm talking about, no, at this point she is still with us but ..... she is gone from his side -
 

Days

Commentator
K

Pity, the abyss

beside him in bed, she dead

he not a clever man


For those who know who I'm talking about, no, at this point she is still with us but ..... she is gone from his side -
damn, white light, this stabs right through me.
 
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